Free Gay Romance Stories and Downloads from EM Lynley #amreading

All stories posted here are male/male erotic romance and contain material not suitable for anyone under the age of 18.

After reading, please vote for your favorite free story on my blog

Dirty Dining–NSFW–11,000 words. Jeremy’s a grad student who’s always short of money. When his fellowship gets canceled he’s tempted to take a job at a men’s dining club as a serving boy. The uniforms are skimpy and he’s expected to remove an item of clothing after each course.  He can handle that., but he soon discovers there’s more on the menu here than fine cuisine. How far will he go to pay his tuition, and will money get in the way when he realizes he’s interested in more from one of his gentlemen?

Sands of Thyme–NSFW–11,000 words–This vacation was not Burke Williams’ idea, but when his sister bought him a vacation at a gay resort, he had no choice but to hop on the plane and go. All the men on lounges seemed so similar to a gay bar. How could he choose a man based on appearance alone? Then he saw a man looking at the water and sky through binoculars, sometimes writing in a notebook. Now Burke was intrigued.

The Interview –NSFW — Mathias is asked to do some very inappropriate things at this “job interview.” A full-chapter excerpt from Hostile Takeover.

Pineapples & Chocolate — NSFW — Ben’s late-night grocery shopping is for much more than food. (Or download PDF)

Precious Gems Series Samples

Book 1: Rarer Than Rubies 3 Chapters– (29 pages/10,000 words) Download PDF of the first three chapters of the novel. Gay romance writer finds adventure with a mystery man in Thailand while hunting for a lost Ruby Buddha. “Indiana Jones” meets Romancing the Stone, only gayer. More Info.

Book 2: Italian Ice 6 Chapters (39 pages/15,000 words) Download PDF
Trent and Reed end up in Italy in search of antiquities smugglers, and find they’re up against something even more sinister. More Info

Would you like to see Kindle/epub versions of these downloads? Leave a comment so I can see how much interest there would be.

 

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Quickie poll: Do excerpts or samples influence you?

amazon-look-insideBack in the olden days when books were made of paper, I loved to browse bookshelves whether at the library or book store. I skimmed, read snippets, and that helped me choose what to read.

Now we get excerpts and samples to download. Somehow it’s not quite the same, but I still love reading something from the book before buying. And I’ve certainly decided just from the sample that I’m not interested.

What about you? Do you make buying decisions on excerpts? Do you need one before you buy? Please vote in the poll and feel free to add a comment if you want to discuss your experiences–or disappointments.

Do excerpts or downloadable samples influence you? (mulitple answers OK)

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Wet Wednesday Photos 3 (Gay-NSFW)

A new gallery of wet to make you wild this Wednesday!

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I’ve included the most popular image from last week.

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The Snorkel Workout

As some of my friends and readers know, I’m on a mission to shed at least 30 pounds by October.

Most weight-loss plans suggest exercising in addition to cutting calories and changing eating habits. Unfortunately for me, one of the reasons I need to lose this weight is due to a knee injury that makes most exercise painful if not impossible.

This is not me.

This is not me.

“Go swimming,” the nurse practitioner told me.

“Oh, yeah. Why didn’t I think of that?”

The reason is that I’m a terrible swimmer. For someone who grew up at the beach (born and raised in Miami Beach, FL) you think I’d be a natural. But I’m not. I used to swim for exercise in grad school, but had to resort to the breast stroke since I am simply too uncoordinated to manage the crawl.

For me, it’s like juggling. There are three things to do and I can only do two of them at a time. I’m simply unable to move my arms, my legs and breathe simultaneously. The result is either that the lower half of my body sinks as I flail my arms and breathe, or I get dramatically out of breath while concentrating on moving the extremities.

Neither result is sustainable and one has a tendency to get a lifeguard blowing a whistle, with embarrassing effects.

This is also not me.

This is also not me.

Nonetheless, I attempted a water workout yesterday at a local private women’s college pool. I decided to try water walking to start. It went well. I got my heart rate up without subjecting my knee to the usual stress of supporting half my weight. Acknowledging that as a full-time writer, my main upper-body workout consists of typing and I eating, I realized water walking wasn’t enough of a workout. So I managed a couple of slow laps of breast stroke in the “recreational section” of the pool.  I wasn’t sure I was fast enough to get into one of the official lap lanes, so I watched the other swimmers for a while.

Which is when I spotted the solution to some (certainly not all) of my problems: some of the swimmers were using SNORKELS while doing laps. What genius! This eliminates the need to remember to rotate your face out of the water before inhaling! One can devote their full focus to arms and legs and not drown. There has to be a Nobel Prize for this. If not, someone should start one.

Thus, my next mission is to obtain a mask and snorkel and manage to get my hefty ass to the pool again to put the technique into action.

Considering it took me two months to get to the pool the first time, don’t hold your breath (ha-ha!) waiting for the follow-up to this. I hope to manage it sometime before the end of the summer.

All in all, I did complete 18 laps: half walking and half slo-mo breast stroke. My arms hurt so I know I got some therapeutic effect. I’m actually looking forward to my next water workout. It didn’t hurt that the pool has a great outdoor Jacuzzi for post-swim relaxing. This is California, after all.

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EM Lynley’s Summer Release Schedule: starts tomorrow!

It’s going to be a hot and busy summer for me. I’m thrilled that my first title with Total-E-Bound will release May 3.

A Lesser Evil

Blinded in a hate attack, painter Rowan McCall sells his soul to a demon to restore his sight, and his guardian angel’s arrival may do more harm than good.

alesserevil_800Rowan McCall is about to start a new phase in his painting career with a one-man show at a prestigious San Francisco art gallery. His moment of triumph is snatched away and Rowan’s life changes forever. Left alone and suicidal, Rowan is determined to do anything to get his life back on track. He strikes a deal with an angel who’s all too willing to help him. Then Rowan discovers Tur’el is anything but an angel—he’s a demon. But he’s just desperate enough to go ahead with the bargain.

Order now at Total-E-Bound, releases May 3.

 

 

In June, I have another upcoming title with TEB, a completely new and expanded edition of VENUS ENVY. Here’s the cover for you to drool over.

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In July Book 3 in the Delectable Series will come out from Dreamspinner Press. I’m waiting on cover art, and will share it as soon as possible. Here’s the draft blurb, to whet your appetite for An Intoxicating Crush.

Simon Ford’s success is hard won. He grew up in Napa and resents the rich people who move into the valley, changing the culture by opening boutique wineries and pricing the locals out of the market.

Austin Kelvin runs an award-winning winery his father started after making a fortune on Wall Street. He lives the posh lifestyle Simon resents but longs to attain. But Austin’s world isn’t as  luxurious and privileged as it seems: Austin didn’t inherit his father’s business savvy, and his winery is going under.

When Simon’s boss sends him out to scope Kelvin Cellars for a possible takeover bid, Simon sees it as a step toward attaining his financial goals. Until he falls hard for Austin. The feeling is mutual until Austin learns the real reason for Simon’s initial interest. He  suspects Simon’s seduction is merely a shortcut to procure the winery at a bargain price.  If there’s any hope of winning Austin’s heart, Simon will have to choose between his professional and personal dreams Simon will have to risk it all to prove Austin is more than a fleeting crush.

 

I’m finishing up Book 3 in the Precious Gems series, Jaded, which should be out this fall from Dreamspinner.

Also this summer, I’ll be re-releasing Sex, Lies & Wedding Bells in a newly edited and expanded edition. And my Rewriting History series featuring a museum curator and his sexy jewel-thief ex will be back. Book 1 Emerald will be available again, then Book 2 Ultramarine and a brand new entry in the series: Siena will debut.

Follow all the Delectable news on our Facebook page for the series: https://www.facebook.com/Delectable.Series

Precious Gems Series page on Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Precious-Gems-Series/239166332894581

 

Which book are you most looking forward to?

 

 

 

 

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Wet Wednesday Photo Album: Showers, Pools and Beaches (Gay – NSFW)

Click for a full-size image. Not responsible for drooling or other side effects from viewing.

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Building a Character Web: Leverage your supporting characters

Figure 1All writers know that you need conflict and tension to drive to story forward, and to engage readers so they want to keep reading. In a thriller, writers can rely more on plot because the reader is anxious to see what happens next.

In romance the reader wants to know what happens to the characters and how it will affect their relationship. It’s important to keep the level of conflict high, but readers will tune out if all you do is throw a new bump in the road to love.

Build a character web, and you won’t have to always rely on the conflict between the main characters.

What’s a character web?

It’s a method of assigning roles to each main and supporting character that crosses alliances and conflicts between each character, and not just in relation to the MCs.

I’ll use my current WIP Crush as an example again. Austin is the Napa winemaker and Simon is the financial guy. There is a conflict between Austin and Simon over their backgrounds and goals, as well as an eventual conflict when Austin thinks Simon cozied up to him just to buyout his winery at a bargain price.

Now let’s add in the supporting characters:

Simon’s boss: He starts in an alliance with Simon. Then when he wants the winery (conflict with Austin), he pushes Simon to do things which harm the relationship with Austin (conflict with Simon and Austin). It also increases the underlying tension between Simon and Austin.

Austin’s dad: He never really supported Austin (conflict with Austin). Later he and Simon end up in conflict. Eventually he’ll end up in an alliance with Simon which helps Austin, and this will allow Austin and Simon to reconcile their differences.

Austin’s brother: He appears to be in alliance with Austin, until we learn he’s the cause of the financial problems which put the winery in jeopardy (conflict with Austin) and he resists Simon’s suggestions for changes ( conflict with Simon.)

Austin’s assistant, Penny: She’s on Austin’s side (alliance with Austin). She’s skeptical of Simon’s suggestions (conflict with Simon), but eventually comes around (alliance with Simon). Then Austin’s concern over Simon’s true motives puts her back into conflict with Simon.

 

As you can see, conflicts and alliances between characters are fluid. You want this to happen as the story progresses. An original ally may become an enemy (Simon’s boss) and an original enemy may become an ally (Austin’s dad).

Not every subplot conflict has to get resolved, but the obstacles to the main couple getting together should be resolved in a way that eventually allows them to get together by the end of the story. Simon and his boss do not resolve their conflict, but other events occur so that conflict doesn’t keep Simon and Austin apart.

If that sounds a bit complicated, just make a list of all your characters. Then write one or two sentences about their relationship with each of the other key characters, indicating whether it’s an alliance or conflict and what the main element of that relationship entails.

Austin

  • Austin’s assistant Penny is an alliance since she supports him in every way around the winery.
  • Austin’s brother Logan is an alliance since they run the winery together. Logan will become a conflict when the financial problems pile up.
  • Simon’s boss is always in conflict with Austin.

 

Penny

  • In alliance with Austin
  • In conflict at first with Simon over what she sees as meddling in winery finances
  • Begins alliance with Simon when she realizes his ideas are good
  • Begins a new conflict with Simon when she thinks he’s trying to cheat Austin out of the winery

 

If you’re a spatial person as opposed to a list maker, write each character’s name on a piece of paper, one in each corner. Then draw lines between each. Solid lines for alliances and dotted lines for conflicts, with a note about each connection. Once you start playing around with all the ways the characters connect, you’ll see many other possibilities. (the image above isn’t a good representation since the arrows don’t go both ways, but in your story and your diagram, each character should have an effect on every other character, or at least on the main characters).

  • Conflict between Simon’s boss and Austin’s father
  • Conflict between Penny and Austin’s brother

Depending on how long the story is, you may be able to explore these secondary conflicts in more detail. That’s called subplot: when the conflict does not involve one of the main characters. In a novella, don’t even think about it. You won’t be able to resolve it without leaving loose threads of the main characters’ conflict. In a novel, subplots can serve as a break so you’re not always concentrating on the main characters and their issues.

In a romance, you want to show some good times between the main characters, but unless some conflict occurs the story can quickly become boring. Such subplots can help keep some tension up while the MCs are enjoying a romantic moment. Even better: have the subplot intrude on the fun for the MCs. Always connect everything back to the main characters and their conflicts, or you can take too much of the spotlight from the main action of the story.

If you find that your stories get bogged down in the middle, reworking some of the conflicts with the supporting characters can help bring more excitement and tension in.

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Have you enjoyed these discussions of building characters and layering the conflicts and alliances? Please leave a comment to let me know. And if you have a topic you’d like me to cover, just ask.

 

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Wet Wednesday Teaser from Crush #HDH #gayromance

naked-guy-getting-out-of-swimming-poolI’m in edits for Crush, book 3 in the Delectable series. The main characters are Austin Kelvin who owns and runs the family winery, and Simon Ford, a business analyst who works for the wine-industry version of a venture capital firm.

Here’s a little taste of what you have to look forward to with these boys. I realized I definitely have a thing for wet, sexy scenes and I hope you do too.

(Unedited, so pardon any errors).

As they passed the equipment shed Austin stopped. He grabbed a water bottle from inside the door and twisted off the cap. To Simon’s surprise he poured the contents over his head, soaking his hair and shirt.

“Damn it’s hot today. I hope Javier sends everyone home.”

Simon grinned as Austin shook his head like a wet dog, splattering him with cool droplets. “I won’t complain about the wet T-shirt. It looks good on you. And off you,” he whispered as he pulled Austin in for a quick, salty kiss. He didn’t think it was a good idea to do more than that with vineyard staff around.

“Hold that thought.”

They walked in silence to the house. In the heat Austin had almost dried off before he reached the front door. Inside Austin grabbed a couple of icy beers from the fridge. They took them out to the pool and sat down at the table. Austin drained half of his in one long pull while Simon sipped.

No matter how many times he saw this place, the pool brought home to him how different he and Austin were. Gold tiles glittered in the sun as the columns threw striped shade across the surface of the water.

Austin finished his beer and stood up. He pulled off his shirt. Simon watched, enjoying the sight of Austin’s paler flesh. Then Austin kicked off his boots and in one smooth move slid out of his pants, shorts and socks. The creamy flesh of his ass contrasted the darker skin of his back and legs. He winked at Simon and dove into the pool.

austins poolSimon watched him swim a lap before shucking his own clothes and joining him. The cool water felt fantastic against his heated skin, though he knew some of that heat was due to Austin and not the weather. Austin swam toward him and they embraced, kissing. Simon kept kicking Austin’s legs as he trod water.

“Sorry.”

“Let’s move to the shallow end.”

They lay together on the steps and kissed, Austin’s body heat warming Simon despite the cool water. Austin wrapped a hand around Simon’s cock, already hard and eager. “Wanna fuck in the pool?”

“Can’t someone see us?” Simon glanced around. He didn’t see anyone but there was no fence around the pool. The tasting room was still open down the hill and you never knew when a tourist would wander somewhere they shouldn’t be.

“Maybe.” Austin gave him a mischievous smile.

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Are you looking forward to reading more?

Delectable Books 1 and 2 are available from Dreamspinner Press:

 

 

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Ten Tips on Using Triberr from @EMLynley

I’m not particularly hip to new social media sites: It took me a few years to even get a Facebook account, so when I first heard of Triberr I admit I ignored it. But author Kayelle Allen made me think twice about using the service. And I’m glad I did.

I’ve absolutely gotten more traffic to my blog since joining. I don’t know whether or not it’s boosted sales, but they can’t buy if they don’t see it, so I’m considering this a win.

(If you haven’t used Triberr, it’s a way to connect with other bloggers: you share links to their blog posts and they share links to yours, magnifying your reach. The bloggers are organized into “tribes” based on subject matter).

What’s not to like about that arrangement? Well, as I started working with it, I found ways to use it more efficiently and effectively.

 

1. Plan your sharing schedule with some care.

When you log into new posts you’re bombarded with pages of new posts to share (if you belong to enough tribes). It’s tempting to just approve a lot of posts and get out of there.

I filter the posts to my most important tribe, and then I share the ones from my friends or people who share a lot of my posts. I want to reward people who share mine and I want to help out my friends. I make sure these friends’ posts don’t end up going during the middle of the night.

Check for time-sensitive posts and approve those first. The bloggers will appreciate you.

More on managing this in the next point:

 

2. Manage how many approved posts you have

If you have your sharing setting for one post per hour and you share 40 posts, then it’s going to be 40 hours before the whole set gets shared. Some posts go in the middle of the night. And if you do the same thing the next day, some posts might not get shared for days. (One friend of mine had a 10-day lag on posts appearing, not useful if the post is time-sensitive such as for a contest or release date event).

Triberr limits you to 100 approved posts at a time, but if you do one an hour, that’s 4 full days’ worth of posts.  At 15-minute intervals, you’re down to a day.

I have mine set for 45 minutes between posts so I know approximately how long until a post goes live. I try to log into Triberr in the morning, so I can fill the day with posts.

 

3. Discover who your “friends” are with sharing stats

In the new layout, if you hover your cursor over the blogger’s icon on the “New Posts” screen, a stats section pops up showing how many posts they wrote that week, how many they shared and whether they shared your post.

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Some bloggers post many times in a week and don’t share anything. No matter who they are, I ignore them. They aren’t playing by the rules so they don’t deserve exposure on my twitter feed. I’ve considered sending the freeloaders a message, since some people don’t really understand how to log in and share.

I reward people who share my posts. I also reward people who share lots of posts, even if it’s not mine. I figure sooner or later they’ll share mine.  However, when someone shares too many, consider the lag issue. I definitely check to make sure the person is sharing more than they are posting.

If a blogger posts once or twice a week, I’ll try to share all their posts. For a blogger who posts 10 times a week, I’ll share a few times.

 

4. Choose wisely: Facebook, Twitter, or both? (aka avoid overload)

At first I shared on both FB and twitter. Then I realized that when I shared on FB a lot of people thought they were clicking through to my blog. It also meant that any of my own links I shared got lost in the noise if I were to share the polite amount of posts each week on my FB wall.

Now I just share Triberr posts on Twitter. It’s a much more fleeting medium, and much higher-volume content anyway. My twitter followers still seem to find and click on my links even if I’m sharing Triberr posts too. One Triberr post every 45 minutes won’t overload these users the way it would on Facebook. (Remember point #2).

For friends and particularly great Triberr posts, I’ll manually share them on Facebook. See #5.

 

5. Use Manual Share to highlight specific posts (especially yours)

You can click the “manually share” link under the post. Icons for twitter, FB, etc., will appear. You choose to send just that post to FB. I do this for a select few posts. The post gets shared immediately.

triberrmanualshareYou can also re-post anything. Go to the “Approved Posts” or the “Sent Posts” tabs and re-approve a post and it will get shared again after everything else in the queue. You can also manually share from these pages to post immediately.

I also do this for all of my own posts. I can control when they show up this way and I can post in several different time zones to make sure international users see my posts too.

Manually sharing a post does not interrupt the regular schedule of posting from the queue of approved posts.

 

6. Put more care into your blog post titles and use the title edit option on Triberr

I’ll lump these under one point, though your blog post title is KEY in getting your post shared and clicked.  If it’s too generic, too vague or doesn’t mention your name it’s a lot less likely to get shared or be of much use to you as promo. It’s a fact of life.  When I see a title like “Super busy week!” I don’t think it’s going to have much value added for my followers. They probably think it’s about me, or they just don’t care about my week (or some total stranger’s). When I have to prioritize which posts I share I’m going for the ones with meaty, interesting titles. And those will interest your followers too.

See that little pen icon next to the title of each post? I use it to add the blogger’s name if there’s any chance my twitter followers might think it’s about me. This also helps your friends by putting their name directly on the posts.

Even better, you can edit YOUR post title, add hashtags, etc. to make it more twitter-friendly.  Some writers do this on their blogs already, but if you don’t want to, make sure to add relevant hashtags once the post gets imported into Triberr. Just go to “My Posts” and edit the title there.

 

7.  Leave comments on other people’s posts

Triberr is great in that it lets you preview the post right on the site without clicking away. And there’s a handy comment box. Leave a nice message about the blog post and you’ll find that people will return the favor, and perhaps be more likely to share your posts in the future.

It’s social media, and that means give and take. Be social with the other bloggers on Triberr. It will pay off.

 

8. Think twice about whether your fleeting thought is really worth a blog post

Now that lots more people are seeing (and hopefully sharing) your posts, consider making each one more thoughtful and useful to your audience.  You probably don’t want to be one of those people with 12 posts per week because they probably won’t all get shared.

If the topic is of great importance to your own followers, go ahead, and don’t worry about what the Triberr friends think. Which leads to the next point:

9. Don’t change your blogging style just for Triberr

Keep blogging for your own fans and followers. They should come first, whether or not Triberr members keep sharing your stuff. If you have a large following, Triberr won’t make a huge difference to you anyway. If you’re starting out and you don’t have a group of fans with specific expectations, then using Triberr to best advantage will mean something different for you.

10. Check your blog stats

Monitor which posts are most popular and which sites are referring them. If you have a hit, try something similar a week or two later to see if the topic, timing, title, etc., are the reason or if it was just the randomness of the internet.

Feel free to share your own tips for making Triberr easier or more effective.

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Building Characters: Why Weaknesses Matter More Than Strengths

strength-weak2In a previous post I discussed the concept of starting out with a character with issues and how the plot action affects the character, creating the character arc.

Character x Plot = Ending

Let’s rewrite that a little bit

Starting Character x Plot = Ending Character

Today’s post will explore how to create both the weaknesses and the relevant plot points to bring the character to a new set of values, behaviors and attitudes. It draws on John Truby’s techniques in The Anatomy of Story.

You want your characters to change over the course of the story. To do that, they must have problems that get solved through the plot, so they emerge better people at the end.

But more than problems, characters must have weaknesses. These weaknesses define them, their actions and attitudes towards other characters. Selecting the right set of weaknesses is vital to setting up the plot and character arc.

Think your hero is too strong to have a weakness? Then he won’t be very interesting to read about. He’d have to be the most amazing guy in the world for readers to slog through a whole book of his adventures. Even Superman and Batman have some issues, and exploring those is what makes reading about them interesting:

How does the hero overcome his problems?

 

Two Kinds of Weaknesses

1. Psychological weakness. This is some issue or behavior that might not seem like a problem, but over the course of the story is exposed as a problem.

In my novel Crush (which I’ve used as an example in other posts) the main character Simon doesn’t go for relationships. He prefers casual hookups. He wants to be rich and he focuses most of his energy on work so he can succeed and eventually get rich. He’s perfectly happy with his life and his goals.

Enter plot… in the form of a love interest. Once he meets Austin (it’s a gay romance…) Simon realizes what he thought were fine values and behaviors mean might not be as he discovers he wants something else out of life. He realizes to succeed in his job he has to learn to cheat people. He has to rethink his personal goals and values.

The psychological weakness is something that hurts the hero. Selfishness, fear of something, attitude toward something. It doesn’t feel like a weakness to him until the plot action makes him realize it.

2. Moral weakness. This takes things to a new level. A moral weakness is something that hurts others, and it a romance, a weakness that hurts the love interest.

Take Simon again. He doesn’t want relationships. That’s a psychological weakness until it affects Austin. Now it’s a moral weakness. Simon’s stance on relationships hurts Austin, who would like to have a relationship with Simon. Until Simon can resolve his attitude about relationships, spending time with Austin does both more harm than good.

How do you find a moral weakness for your hero? It might be organic to the story you want to tell, and the change you want to create for your character. How will he become a better person in how he treats others (specifically the love interest if you’re writing romance)? The starting point will be your moral weakness.

Look at the psychological weaknesses and find an immoral action that stems from them. What moral weakness does that imply for the character?

Another way is to take one of the hero’s strengths and warp it into a weakness. A firefighter who is brave sounds like a hero. But if it leads him to take risks that put his crew in danger, it is a moral weakness. A cop or lawyer who blurs the edges of the law to get the bad guys are two more examples.

What strengths most define your hero? How can you exaggerate one into a negative? (Here’s a list of strengths to work with.)

Take one of his virtues, and create a weakness that is completely the opposite. A hero who is scrupulously honest is hiding a terrible secret and it’s hurting someone else until he owns up to the truth.

Once you have your character’s weaknesses defined (the starting point), write down what corresponding value he will hold at the end of the story. How will each weakness be overcome or resolved so we go from the set of starting issues to the final values? That will give you plenty of ideas for the heart of the story.

A. Simon wants to be rich.—-> B. Simon realizes there are more important things than money.

How does Simon go from A to B? He realizes that to succeed in his job (and obtain wealth) he has to do things which hurt other people and might even be illegal. At first he brushes off the impact that has on him, but when Austin’s family winery becomes the target, Simon finally realizes how much damage he is doing. He reevaluates both his goals and his behavior.

 

Two Main Characters

When you’re writing romance, you will have two key characters. Should you do this process for both?

That depends, mainly on the length of the piece. In a novel, you can explore both characters’ weaknesses, but in anything shorter, focus on the arc of just one character. Even in a novel, if you focus more on one character’s journey you can do a better job of completing it satisfyingly, without rushing, skimping or dragging out the story too far past one character’s resolution. If both characters clash and resolve their weaknesses in the same plot arc, then it might work. You don’t need to give both main characters an equal number of scenes or treatment, even in a romance. Sometimes there’s more drama and conflict when readers see (and identify with) more of one character’s story.

Just be sure to choose the character who has the bigger weaknesses and travels the farthest in the story, the one who has lower lows. Readers will be drawn in by his dilemmas and the painful choices he has to make.

 

Your turn. If you’re working on a new story, play around with these concepts as you’re building your characters. If you’re already writing, take a break and examine the character arcs you’ve planned and see if adding in some of these elements will create more interesting characters.

 

Questions? Leave a comment.

 

 

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