{"id":226,"date":"2009-05-12T10:04:00","date_gmt":"2009-05-12T18:04:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.emlynley.com\/blog\/?p=226"},"modified":"2009-05-12T10:04:00","modified_gmt":"2009-05-12T18:04:00","slug":"need-some-feedback-on-blurbs-friends-only","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.emlynley.com\/blog\/need-some-feedback-on-blurbs-friends-only\/","title":{"rendered":"Need some feedback on blurbs [friends only]"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I&apos;m working on the blurbs for my Cobblestone release and I&apos;d love to get some comments\/critique from my flist. Please let me know whether you like it or not and what I&nbsp;should change.<\/p>\n<p><!-- GoStats Simple HTML Based Code --> <a target=\"_blank\" title=\"web stats log analyzer\" href=\"http:\/\/gostats.com\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" decoding=\"async\" alt=\"web stats log analyzer\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/c2.gostats.com\/bin\/count\/a_618643\/t_5\/i_1\/counter.png\" style=\"border-width: 0pt;\" \/><\/a> <!-- End GoStats Simple HTML Based Code --><br \/>I&nbsp;need 4 different ones of different lengths: 100, 50, 25 &amp;&nbsp;12 words! I&apos;m freaking out. It&apos;s hard enough to write one.&nbsp; Thank you in advance!<\/p>\n<p>100 words<br \/>Drake Talbott is a young university professor with a big secret: he&apos;s been dating a student. Hunky, handsome Kerry Monroe isn&apos;t in any of&nbsp;Drake&apos;s classes, but he has a public sex kink that Drake is in no particular hurry to curb. In fact Kerry&apos;s brought out a wilder side of Drake that he never knew he possessed. 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Please let me know whether you like it or not and what I&nbsp;should change. I&nbsp;need 4 different ones of different lengths: 100, 50, 25 &amp;&nbsp;12 words! I&apos;m freaking out. It&apos;s hard enough to write one.&nbsp; Thank [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":63,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-226","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/pzLgx-3E","jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.emlynley.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/226","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.emlynley.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.emlynley.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.emlynley.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/63"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.emlynley.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=226"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"http:\/\/www.emlynley.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/226\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.emlynley.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=226"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.emlynley.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=226"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.emlynley.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=226"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}